How can i turn, “the children were nestled all snug in their beds, while visions of sugarplums danced in their heads; and momma in her kerchief, and i in my cap, had just settled down for a long winter’s nap” into informal writing

The answer is:

The children were lying warmly and tightly in bed, while they were having sweet dreams; and momma in her bandana, and I in my cap, had just got ready to take a long winter's nap.

An informal register is used when speaking or writing to people we know well, like family and friends. There are no considerable rules in informal language, so it is appropriate to tell jokes and the use of slang, contractions, personal opinions, incomplete sentences and extra punctuation.

adding more details about the struggle rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.