Which revision would most improve sentence 7?

Well that would depend on what sentence 7 is

amazing

explanation:

i really like the quality of it and how it's been played keep it up

dickinson punctuation and lines in her poems to establish a rhythm. each reader will naturally find themselves reading the poem in the same way. she uses the repeating question marks and exclamation points to convey the passion in her words. shelley uses punctuation to paint a picture in the reader's mind. for example, the ellipses after "stand in the dessert" evoke a silence, as it would feel in a deserted, old place.