Which of the following sentences contains a comma error? with the moving van packed, my friend had to say goodbye. the packages became too heavy for me, i dropped them. everyone, even our neighbors, came to our super bowl party. my sweet, quiet father surprised us with his outburst yesterday

The first option:

With the moving van packed my friend had to say goodbye.

There should be no comma there.

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-My sweet quiet father surprised us with his outburst yesterday.

Explanation:

The sentence "My sweet quiet father surprised us with his outburst yesterday" contains a comma error. The comma doesn't go between sweet and quiet because "My sweet quiet father" is a complete constituent and It can't be separated by a comma. The adjectives "sweet" and "quiet" are modifying the noun "father" so "My sweet quiet father" is a phrase.

can you take a picture of the passage so i can answer your question

well if u read the book you would know that she meant to