Hey guys, i'm writing a causal analysis on suicide awareness and i'm struggling to form a topic and thesis for it. the topic i am thinking about is "why we should be raising suicide awareness." i feel like it could use improvement and i also have no idea how i should write up my thesis. in my paper i want to talk about causes of suicide and possible means of prevention. any ideas? in advance!

Ya this is great. Suicide is often viewed as a hard condition while the person who is suffering with in, has a hard rough time in life that makes them think that their live is worth ending. Listen to that again, Life is not worth ending it is a gift you are here today here. I been through this and hard time I just now that I have to keep trying to not give up because If I do I will not have been doing what I truly wanted. I want to be happy it is not easy since I care so much what people think about me and that grows to a pressure you feel you can’t no more.It is all your mind try to control it to be positive.

The title is good but If you put more emotion like “ Hard negativity is not a game it is a challenge we must fight “ something between this. I can have made a better one by but I have a lot in mind. Make it like a story movie and put your self in this position as me will help you bring all this together.

oral reading is important because then you may end up loving to read if you hate it now. i hope i .

hasty generalization