50 points revise the sentence below to improve fluency. specifically, add variety to the sentence types, and use transitional words so the sentences flow smoothly. summer is my favorite season. i enjoy the warm weather. school ends. i like to go swimming, have picnics, and relax. i hope you like summer, too.

I enjoy the warm weather my favorite season, summer, brings to our area. The season is when school lets out, (my favorite part). As the weather is nice and warm, perfect for swimming, picnicking, and a variety of other activities. I hope you enjoy summer too.

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well stockyards mean a large yard containing pens and sheds, typically adjacent to a slaughterhouse, in which livestock is kept and sorted. and i'm assuming that by party you   mean a large group of people which does make sense because chicago is a very crowded place much like new york. stockyards tend to take up a lot of room due to needing the area for pens to keep animals in and the fact that stockyards are usually right by slaughterhouse where they process and distribute the product. so its much like a zoo but with some dead animal products close by.

industrialization in great britain began with the global 'industrial revolution', a pioneer. industrialization in russia was the last in europe, a laggard.

great britain’s industrialization was driven by individual citizens, while russia’s was guided by the government.