If you were offered immortality, would you take it. why or why not. (5-6) sentences

No, I would not take it because if you lived for the rest of the world then it would get boring and would seem like the same day over and over again. I would also not be able to see my family members that I grew up with and spent my life knowing and loving. Another reason why I wouldn't consider immportality for a choice to me is because maybe in the future things get worse and worse to live and because after all there is a lot of polution in the earth, who knows how much there will be in 100 years? I could not handle the anoyyance of just living for so many years wondering what will happen next. Or if things will change, because the same thing over and pver again is boring and not worth the power of imortality.

(d) alice notices that the glass is melting away. because that aint real

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.