Capitalization errors in this sentence , my father and i have already visited several states this month.

I'm not sure how many errors you are looking for but, this is what I got:

My Father and I, have already several states this month.

I really only see one error. Father should be capitalized because Father is a title of a person. I would also say the "I" should always be capitalized but, it looks like you already got that. Everything else seems ok.

you didn't provide the passage.

explanation:

seeing as this is your first question on i can see why you may have not known that you need to provide the passage.

without the passage, or even the name of the passage, we can not read the passage, therefore we can not determine when or how the pacing effects the tone.

however, you can either repost this question (providing the passage this time)

or you can comment below what the passage is, and i'll you to the best of my ability!

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