Iwas telling my dad about how much i like starting a new notebook.
which revision best uses dialogue to show the narrator’s feelings?
a. when i open the cover, the smell of fresh paper wafts up to greet me and the crisp, open page fills me with an exquisite sense of possibility.
b. when i first open the notebook, i take care to crease the cover gently so that it’s nice and flexible, and then i can enjoy writing without fussing.
c. i’m happy about the notebook because now i can get started on writing down the song that’s been floundering in my head all week.
d. i’m glad to have a new notebook because i’m hoping it will provide inspiration to start working on that short story that’s due in english soon.