Read this excerpt from a student’s analytical essay. the nursery rhymes that alice recites in the story come true afterward, which is really weird and interesting to me. which is the best revision of this informal sentence? some of the nursery rhymes recited by alice may be familiar to readers, because they are well-known. the weirdness of the nursery rhymes coming to life after alice recites them needs to be remembered. it is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after alice recites them. i cannot believe that nursery rhymes actually happen after alice recites them to herself.

The best revision of this informal sentence is:

It is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after Alice recites them.

The reason for the selection is that it is the only sentence that does not add extra information, a personal point of view about some of the information, or gives information that is not present in the original sentence.

Apart from the fact that this sentence uses proper grammar, and neutral academic language.

It is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after Alice recites them.

Explanation:

you didn't provide the passage.

explanation:

seeing as this is your first question on i can see why you may have not known that you need to provide the passage.

without the passage, or even the name of the passage, we can not read the passage, therefore we can not determine when or how the pacing effects the tone.

however, you can either repost this question (providing the passage this time)

or you can comment below what the passage is, and i'll you to the best of my ability!