Is the wording is shakespeare’s scene meant to sound like real dialogue? why or why not?

It is true that in Shakespeare's scene, he means to sound like a real dialogue for he wants to show his play to the audiences with a feeling of it being real. This will help his audiences to feel emotions and to capture their hearts and attention in showing the play that he makes. He tries to make real dialogue for the the audiences to enjoy his play and to reach out for them.

umm of course in fact ur getting your answer : )

first of all the mood needs to be defined: it is obviously a mood of deceitful relief and serenity. why? because the cape horn is one of the most violent maritime regions of earth and although it has been left behind, it is a personification of ahab’s delirium and the fact that the end of the passage speaks about it about being “hidden” but “raving” immediately conveys the feeling the calm is not permanent but fleeting.

furthermore, the oxymoron “mild stun'sails” is the first instance of such feeling as the adjective “mild” is associated with “stunned” underscoring the fleeting nature of this “tranquil” moment. and the contrasts keep piling up, with the opposition between “dark den” and “blessed light and air” to end with the final conclusion that leaves the reader with the uneasy knowledge that this is just a reprieve.