I’d like to get a job there because i like digging around and planting things. which revision changes the tone of this because of this sentence informal to formal

Change “digging around” to “to dig in dirt”. Remove “Things”

The details that best show evidence of tribal traditions are, "never in the history of his people had a man married a woman who spoke a different tongue” and "it has never been heard," was the verdict of an old man speaking a few weeks later.