Read the passage from when birds get the flu and cows go mad by john diconsiglio. hughes and other investigators from the fda began tracking the cow's parts through washington, oregon, and idaho. for 32 days, they drove along icy roads in the middle of the night. they logged thousands of miles and battled fierce snowstorms. they slept in little motels and ate at truck stops. some trudged through muddy farms and feed mills. others picked through carcasses in slaughterhouses. some pulled bad burgers from grocery store shelves. at night, they talked on the phone and compared the day's results. the writer could best revise the passage to make it stronger by adding a claim about the dangers of travel. adding a thesis to introduce the topic of cows. adding a quotation from hughes about the events. adding a summary of the details using different words.

judy jones is an attractive woman who receives attention from many men throughout the story.   despite her beautiful appearance, she is superficial and callous.   she is an aggressive woman who goes after any man she desires but she is not happy.   she is fickle and is never satisfied.   her beauty is only skin deep.   dexter breaks down because he knows his dreams are unattainable.   he believes that wealth and physical beauty are what will make him happy.   he soon realizes that she has lost her attractive looks.   it is not all what he had planned.

gatsby's clothes have a symbolic meaning, as the use of colour and fabric in his clothing demonstrates his hope, dreams, and wealth. gatsby's clothing symbolizes his wealth through his torn shirt, his silver and gold suit, and his english shirts.

his occupation are

businessman yachtsman soldier entrepreneur bootlegger