Rewrite the following sentences to make them more concise and precise. From Philip Laplante, Technical Writing: A Practical Guide for Engineers and Scientists 1. The mechanism will require a substantial amount of redesign.
2. The main housing mechanism as well as the linkage assembly must be thoroughly lubricated.
3. There are many replacement parts available out there.
4. Metal fatigue points often can and do result in major system failures.
5. Once the diagnostic tests are finished without reporting a failure, you are ready to fire up the engine.
6. During the give-and-take session with the customer, the following concerns were raised:
7. A repair kit must go along with each unit sold.
8. Using the diagnostic system installed on the main system,
9. The possible reasons for a subsystem failure are many fold:
10. After adding six quarts of reagent, the mixture will be more clear.
11. Each unit will weigh, more or less, 70 kg.
12. The customer was put off by the latest test trials.
13. A really strong odor was noticeable.
14. To start off the procedure,
15. These facts, taken as a whole, indicate that a system failure was inevitable.
16. One of the major actors in this disaster is speculating on a software tie-in.
17. The flexible strap is used for tying in together…
18. The vehicle must be able to operate in the presence of very fast currents.
19. The main software system should work together with the safety subsystem.

1. The mechanism will require redesign.

2. The main housing mechanism and linkage assembly must be lubricated.

3. there are many replacement parts available.

4. Metal fatigue often results in major system failure.

5. When the diagnostic  test is completed without failure then engine can be fired.

6.  During session with customer these questions were raised.

7. Repair kit will go with each unit sold.

8. Use the diagnostic system

9. Reason for subsystem failure are many fold

10. when 6 quarts are added the reagent mixture will be more clear.

11. Each unit will be near to 70kg.

12. customer put off by latest trials.

Explanation:

13. Strong odor was noticed.

14. Start the procedure

15. These facts indicate that system failure was inevitable.

16. Major actor is speculating on a disaster of tie in.

17. Flexible strap is used for tying together.

18. Vehicle must be able to operate in fast current.

19. Main software system should work together with safety subsystem.

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