Read the scenario, and answer the question. Enrique interviewed for a copyeditor position six days ago. He decides to write a follow-up e-mail to ask how the decision process is going. He composes a first draft, but he knows that he will need to make some revisions.

To Whom It May Concern:
My interview last week was enjoyable. Thank you. I am still interested in the job. In fact, I really, really need a job in the next week. I haven't heard anything from you or the human resources representative, and I am wondering what the holdup is. I'm very eager to know your decision, so if you could hurry things up, I would greatly appreciate it. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Enrique Heller

Choose one possible revision suggestion for the previous follow-up letter.

a. Avoid sounding discourteous and desperate.
b. Include statements that will force the employer to contact him.
c. Include a line that demands to know when he will be contacted.