Drew this how does it look? Any ideas to Improve?

the lines look really clean and the depth looks great but it would really stand out if you started shading some areas my advice is to ftart light and then build opacity as you go along so areas that would appear darker. Think of this Drawing as a 3D action figure in this pose and imagine and decide which angle the light is coming from the areas where the light doesn't hit should be shaded. hopefully that makes sense and it looks super cool

Wow thats a really good drawing! I'd suggest adding some shading to give it more depth. Hatching is a really easy way of shading, if you were interested.

Hope this helps!