Katie, please don't take this down, it is for my creative writing class. I need feedback before I submit this, so please don't give me a warning for this. It is homework.
I just need some feedback and criticism on this character that I created.
Name: Nex Amor
Gender: Non-binary
Pronouns: They/them
Age: 19
Sexuality: Pan demisexual
Face shape: Sharp and angular
Skin tone: Fair
Ethnicity: Italian with Greek ancestry
Hair color: Black with a white streak
Hair style: Messy and long wolfcut hairstyle
Eye color: Green
Distinguishing features: Lifeless-like eyes
Height: 6'2
Body: Average body size with light muscling
Flaws: Sh. it communication skills, emotionless, blunt, callous, and humorless.
Strengths: Independent, confident, honest, and intelligent.
Hobbies: Grocery shopping, cooking, taking walks, composing music, and playing the piano.
Habits: Spending more money than they have.
Fears: Fish, being viewed as weak, and the ocean.
Likes: Food, being left alone, classic romance novels (Sense and Sensibility and Pride and Prejudice being their favorites), classical music, the sound of violins and the piano, sleeping, and collecting small stuffed animals.
Dislikes: People, being dependent on others, asking for help, and fish.
Parent(s): Just a dad who is verbally abusive to Nex and deadnames them often.
Siblings: A little sister named Sabrina and an older sister named Nya who passed away.
Love interest: Cue (Cue's character sheet is somewhere in my questions if you are wondering who he is)
Favorite...
Color: White
Food: Ratatouille
Possession: Their katana
Weapon: Katanas
Animal: Birds (cause they eat fish)
Song: Probably a song that they wrote or I Hear A Symphony by Cody Fry.
Other: (TW: Death) Nex hates fish so much because his sister Nya drowned in the ocean after being taken down by waves and being knocked into rocks repeatedly. They couldn't find her body for hours after she was drug under the water. But Nex finally found her almost 12 hours later and by the time they had discovered her body, fish had already begun to eat away at her.
P. S. The art below is not mine and I do not claim it as my own. All credit goes to the original artist.
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