Pls pls pls pls help will give branlyest :D What things can you do improve the style of your report?

Move some of your paragraphs around.
Add more reasons to support your main claim.
Make sure you use a variety of sentences types or structures.

Why did christianity form? 30 points

To make an etching the artist first coats the entire printing plate with an acid-resistant substance called a made from beeswax, asphalt, and other material. the artist then draws on the coated plate with an etching needle exposing the metal. next the plate is dipped in the plate is removed, the waxy coating removed, and the plate is cleaned, inked and printed.

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