Got another POEM for you guys, please tell me what I can fix or what you liked best or stuck out to you once again it will not hurt my feelings.. It is called Always Smile. Always smile
At least that’s what everyone says
But why smile when you feel in denial
Honest I can smile but when I do
I feel that nothing is changed and happiness is never arranged
The funny thing is I don’t feel sad either
It’s like someone shot a bullet through my emotions
Because I feel nothing no pain
And no happiness
I am just a person with no emotions
How did I even get this way
Now there’s a lot of commotions
But I have no emotions
So what am I suppose to do
Sure you could get the bullet out
But it won’t help me inside and out
Even if you stick by my side
Just give it some time
You’ll shoot me again
I know you lied
You never be my die or ride
And that’s why you not even my side

Always smile

At least that’s what everyone says

But why smile when you feel in denial

Honest I can smile but when I do

Honestly

I feel that nothing is changed and happiness is never arranged

The funny thing is I don’t feel sad either

It’s like someone shot a bullet through my emotions

Because I feel nothing no pain

Take away the nothing

And no happiness

I am just a person with no emotions

How did I even get this way

Now there’s a lot of commotions

But I have no emotions

So what am I suppose to do

Sure you could get the bullet out

But it won’t help me inside and out

I perfer you to take the "and" Out but its your choice

Even if you stick by my side

Just give it some time

You’ll shoot me again

I know you lied

You never be my die or ride

And that’s why you not even my side

"And thats why your not even on my side"

Explanation:

I hope it helps thats what i think you could change i tried my best hope it helps

12-bar blues chorus = a a b