Read the paragraph.
(1) We went to the Museum of Natural Science to see the new gem exhibit. (2) The display included and showed minerals from all over the world. (3) The most impressive part of the show was the extensive display of diamonds and other precious stones.
Which revision makes one of the sentences more concise?
A. Sentence 1: Delete the word “gem.”
B. Sentence 2: Delete the phrase “and showed.”
C. Sentence 3: Change “impressive” to “interesting.”
D. Sentence 3: Change “show” to “exhibit.”
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