My song is good? i just finished

I think the world is cold like this void in my soul it feels like i am falling down a endless hole never to reach the sun the light the happiness i desire most in my life all this pain and suffering all the voices in my head they wish i was dead ring ring depression on the phone will never leave you alone or on your own any more “lock the door and turn out the lights” I don't want to fight i hide and hope it leaves me alone “hide and hope it leaves you alone” you are alone and on your own just leave me alone don’t open the door you will let him in bang bang on the door it was all a dream your back with the team still living in the sun the light shines down on you