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How do these cultures use the element of shape in very similar ways

The first c.d. was released after the phonograph. 75 years 200 years 100 years 50 years

Alex thinking about repleacing the word feared at the end of paraghaph 2 with dreaded. why do you think he want to make that change? dreaded has a neutral connotation, feared has a neutral connotation, dreaded has a stronger negative connotation, feared has a more negative connotation.