Iam making a song, rate it 1-10 and tell me what i can do to make it better

yeah

look

(verse one)

i've been through some stuff and it's been really tough

i was down but not out

all i needed was some

i never asked for i was all alone

i never needed the money i can get my own

god i'm sorry don’t send me to hell i never sipped that lean

i should just shut up and let my hook sing

(hook)

asked for and got turned away

tried to look the other way but everyone's so caught up in their ways

trouble's out and everywhere

can't avoid it so i jumped into it

but end of the day, all i needed was some

(verse two)

i know life ain’t the drugs ain’t worth it

nobody understands what i feel

all these guys are like h*es, leaving me for the dirt

thought everybody was like this

but they all ain’t

started acting young and wild

pull up i put you in shock cause i’m wild

act up gonna get sh*t by a child

you d*ad, he d*ad don’t really care who d*ad i'm put you in a sled

you gonna try get the feds

i got your girl in the bed, she ride me just like i am dead

didn’t you listen to what i said