Hi can someone grade my AP World History DBQ out of 7? Evaluate the extent to which the experience of the First World War changed relationships between Europeans and colonized peoples.

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Why does pacholke say that it shouldn’t make you happy that “as a prison system, as a nation, and as a society, we've become very good” at containing and controlling the people who have fallen through all of the other societal safety nets? what do you feel that he is insinuating by this statement? explain.