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"Home?" Here I am, 16 years old.
In this space supposedly called "home."
I wake up and I feel trapped in my body.
'Cause no one can hear me.
No, not anybody.
I thought that's what I wanted.
For others to listen.
Though, every time I try to speak
my eyes start to glisten.
Family thinks I need help.
Says I'm depressed and insecure.
Maybe but, how do you know?
What can you infer?
Friends think I'm happy and the sweetest person they know.
Yes, I keep the feelings deep down, below.
So, that they will never know.
I don't want to be a burden to them.
So, I don't tell them, "What's going on?"
It's better that way.
Especially when I don't know how to respond.
Here I am, 16 years old.
In this space supposedly called "home."
I wake up and I feel trapped in my body.
'Cause no one can hear me.
No, not anybody.
To be honest, I didn't know how to feel.
No, not anymore.
I really just wanna go out the door.
Or maybe.. Let my body hit the floor?
No, I can't think like that.
I can't go, it's not my time.
I'll wait, and I'll leave.
In due time.
Ok, I'm done.
I don't want to talk anymore.
But, before you go...
Could you shut the door?

Hey here's some free points. Also, could you tell me if that was good or not? Or do I need to change something? I would really love the feedback. ^-^

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